I know I’ve done this “announcement” thing in the wrong order, but I’m here to tell y’all about my latest might-be-masterpiece-after-a-dozen-drafts, “Finding You”. I had this idea for the first scene (though instead of a rooftop it originally took place in a field) and started writing, with no thought to the fact that I had no storyline whatsoever. I didn’t even have names for the characters. But I saw something in my head and had to write it down. “The Flash” (as Emily Starr would have me call it) of inspiration comes to me like this A LOT, but 9 1/2 times out of 10 it results in crumpled papers that sit for years in my file box and never see the light of day after the first moment I’ve written them.
This time, however…it worked.
I decided I wanted my world to be a SteamPunk one (I’ve never read or written any SteamPunk before; my experience comes completely from video games and internet image searches, so bear with me) and I wanted it to be about separation, and then searching. I didn’t know that a mixed up plot about war and trafficking and white-hot brands and outlaws and a brothel and other crazy random happenstance would evolve, though.
But…it has!
I’ve written about twenty pages (the chapters are less than a page each) and I’m anxious to post more, after I make sure that what I’ve got lines up with my vision for the story.
For once I’m super excited about my supporting cast: that’s not to get your hopes up, because they could be absolute rubbish, despite my best efforts, but I’m looking forward to their stories as much as I am to my protagonists’.
If you’ve read any of “Finding You” on Figment, you’ve met Tam and Isla, my hero and heroine. They’re opposites: he’s bold and thrill-seeking, she’s quiet and meek, friends all their lives, and basically, they love each other. This love is newly realized when circumstances cause Tam to join the army, and misfortune finds Isla kidnapped and on her way to be trafficked with a score of other girls to be sold to underground brothels and clients. It’s not fun.
But amidst her horrific circumstances, Isla (unable to get word to / from Tam, obviously) learns who she is, and becomes one of a cast of other “unfortunates” that I cannot wait to write about. Including, but by no means limited to two of my guys:
Des – modeled in looks after Dominic Cooper, in personality kinda (wait for it…) after Peter Pan. Let me just say that I’ve had a “back-of-my-mind” crush on Peter Pan since I read the book as an 11-year old and thought he was the greatest thing to hit planet earth…sort of.
Oliver – a slave since he was a kid, when he got his tongue cut out (he can’t talk now…in case you didn’t derive that) but happens to be quick with anything that involves his hands: machinery, sleight of hand, lock picking, etc and is rather adorable and is kinda like a kid even though he’s like 17.
And then I’ve got some fairly sinister villains planned, with names like Zachariah Curram and Ambrose Hoctor. So I’m feeling happy about this story.
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Oh, and these are Tam and Isla:
(Alex Pettyfer)
(same as cover…random image)